I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey everyone, today I will be showing you Miss Trunchball's office. I made this all myself. I am looking forward to see your kind comments! Have a safe week!
Good morning Krystallynna. I am guessing Mrs Trunchball is a book character as I haven't heard her name being mentioned at our school. I do like the office you have given her although I'm not sure what you have put on her desk.Is there a computer,a glass of water and maybe a hard drive.I hope to hear from you soon.
Good morning Mrs Cassidy, thanks for commenting on my blog post. On the desk it's Mrs Trunchballs's choclate cake. Well there is no computer and no hard drive. But there is a glass of water. Bye have a amazing day!
Hi Krystallynna Great to see you have include some thoughtful things for Mrs Trunchbull's office. Do you think you could add labels to your drawing to explain why you have included the things you have? For example I know why you have included the glass of water, the chocolate cake and "The Chokey" but your reader (like Mrs Cassidy) might not be sure. I love how you have drawn "The Chokey" and the table and chair yourself.
Good morning Krystallynna.
ReplyDeleteI am guessing Mrs Trunchball is a book character as I haven't heard her name being mentioned at our school.
I do like the office you have given her although I'm not sure what you have put on her desk.Is there a computer,a glass of water and maybe a hard drive.I hope to hear from you soon.
Good morning Mrs Cassidy,
Deletethanks for commenting on my blog post. On the desk it's Mrs Trunchballs's choclate cake. Well there is no computer and no hard drive. But there is a glass of water. Bye have a amazing day!
Hi Krystallynna
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you have include some thoughtful things for Mrs Trunchbull's office. Do you think you could add labels to your drawing to explain why you have included the things you have? For example I know why you have included the glass of water, the chocolate cake and "The Chokey" but your reader (like Mrs Cassidy) might not be sure. I love how you have drawn "The Chokey" and the table and chair yourself.
Hi Miss Mclachlan,
DeleteThanks for comenting on my blog. I think I agree what you just said. Thanks for saying so much kind things. Have a great day!